I've been practicing my makeup

I've been practicing my makeup lately, what do you all honestly think? I appreciate some honest answers and criticism 💜 (no this is isn't my everyday makeup, just for some random gusto-ko-mag-pic , moments) Personally I thinkg the aegyosal got smudged a lot and the eyeshadow cant really be seen on cam (it's a gradient from pink to green). I also don't do my brows and mascara. Any tips would be highly appreciated

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